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By:Pranav In the beginning of the chapter, Johnathan finds himself sitting by a fire with his throbbing head. He finds out that the person who hit him was named Bracy Gwinnett, and he finds out that the man that died was named Zeke. He tells Bracy that he's in the Continental Artillery, and he finds out that he's slept for a really long time. He makes it to the ship though, and he convinces Bracy to sign on to the artillery. When he goes into the ship, Bracy goes to sign up. After that, the crew stands in a circle and starts drinking rum. Johnathan doesn't want to drink it, but he thinks he has to, so he can be accepted into the group. Then, someone shouts, "British frigate ahead!" Good job Pranav. Your summary is very well done. My only suggestion would be to try to think of a different way to say "finds out." You use this expression four times in the beginning of your summary and it becomes a bit repetitive. See if you can think of something to relace a couple of them.